But personally I believe a business letter should end with Very truly yours, not Sincerely.
还行,乔治。但是我个人相信一封商业信函应该以“敬上”结尾,而不是“谨启”。
and found our then prevailing primitive state completely uninteresting to their own advanced knowledge.
并且发现我们地球当时普遍存在着的原始状态同他们先进的知识相比是索然无味的。